Video Feedback

Our video has been shown to our client: Jane Marshall. Overall, she seemed pretty impressed. She said our video flowed well and that I was a natural at presenting; Sarah concurred. We still have a few issues with our video. Sound is hard to hear at times due to the music being too loud or the dialogue being too quiet. A simple fix on Adobe Premiere Pro will sort this out. We also have a few grammar errors here and there; these too can be easily fixed. One part of my narration doesn't make any chronological sense as I say we've learned what we should eat, when we get to hear advice on that, not before then, but later on.

I'm pleased with our results. A few tweaks here and there and we're all set for a good grade.